Two words......

LOVE IT!!!!!!!

I love the first one! It is so true lol

xx

I love the 2nd one!!!

Thialy

awww..that is a good poem. your great at it. keep bringing out your feeling into the poem. it make u feel better.

prides2jesus

That's isn't your writing's, is it?

Nice.

But boys don't have to go.

u mean why we broke up? well we broke up for a couple reasons. Everything started to "change" between us. I have strict guardians so i did what i could to see him but i guess it wasn't enough and i became undependable to him. also he was such a liar i never believed N E Thing he said even down to the I love you's. (which i still hear to this very day) i told him i stopped trusting him and knowing what i know now i don't think i ever can again. he has someone else and i know i should leave him alone but it's so hard mainly b/c he was my bff first. so much happened but yea this is the basic story

Why must you "create" yourself?  Shouldn't you be who you are?   Just be.

thanks for the comment. and trust me. you really wouldnt want to have such a big family.it sucks!!

x

Thanks for the comment, I'm trying to study but it's hard to concentrate, i will study later on though, i need a high mark tomorrow.

I love the birds at the begin of your entry

Dee.

so i got your comment on my entry, and although im glad im not the only one who feels the way i do, im sad to hear that your going through the same thing.

but i was just going to lt you know this poem or whatever it is is quite amazing and i know exactly what you mean,

This is true but Its far better to have love and have lost then to have never of loved at all.

Dizzy

I really love this entry.
It's deep.
From a scale of 1 to 10
It's a perfect 10!
Thanks a bundle for sharing this.

Hugssss
Gabby=)

This is the best entry I've read so far!!!!!!
Seriously..
every single word in this entry is exactly what's trapped in my heart..
the pain that we'll can never get over..
the courage we need to face our everyday..

the lies and promises that we've believe stays on..
it's like a poison eating us inside out..
forgiving him might take awhile..
forgetting him might take forever..
loving him is for eternity..

watching him leave is probably the hardest to swallow..
wishing and dreaming that he'll return is our hope to face our everyday..
the strength we need to see him with someone else is going to take every ounce of
our body,heart and soul..

BUT still ..
by the end of the day..
I love him..
Yesterday,Today,Tomorrow and Always...

Thanks, yeah thats me

"no girl needs somebody who doesnt need her & no boy is worth your tears .. & the one who is will never make you cry .."

100% agree!!!!

these are really good! and really true
I love the fifth one.
=]
<3 miley

you never know how much
you need your friends in life
until you look down the rope 
&&& realize how many knots they`ve tied
just to keep you from slipping ..

Really really amazing. You made that up on your own? I found that intimidatingly original :P

=)

oh please do add more! I love poems!

<3 miley

ohh this is absolutely lovely! did you write it yourself?

<3 miley

amen to that girl!

<3 miley

Thats was one of my old fav. poems when I was going out with my POS ex!

Its totally true...